If you want to write, pay attention to the advice given.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:04:05Unfortunately it was too short. xxx 6/10.READERReport 2008-03-08 04:11:25Was BollockaREADERReport 2008-02-25 06:18:41Bloody pathetic story. You could have done a lot with this story, but you wimped out and gave us three minute drivel. The writer should get back to his /her day job of garbage collector.«12» 7 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-28 07:54:38i wanted a hard on but barely got flaccid.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:05:11It’s all been said. This was just a snapshot in time. You could have done a lot with this story, but you wimped out and gave us three minute drivel. Was it even that long? Nothing erotic, nothing to get even vaguely hard with. Complete crap in fact. Nothing erotic, nothing to get even vaguely hard with.
