4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. xxx video I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing. Anyway, I really liked your story. I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. It feels like you are skipping around a lot; whether or not you are is a mystery. I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05
