4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. xxx I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. Secondly, why would someone who prays be on this site? I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting.
