6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-29 08:55:31Well done, thanks! xxx 18 Tell us about his eyes, his lips, skin tone, be vivid when describing. Tell us about his eyes, his lips, skin tone, be vivid when describing. Please tell us more about Greg and Lukas!anonymous readerReport 2013-05-22 11:11:37This pstiong knocked my socks offanonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 20:21:53it wont let me continue, i wrote the next part, and it shut down my accountanonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 18:13:02HA GAAAAAAY! Please continue this is going to be amazing!«12» Tell us about his eyes, his lips, skin tone, be vivid when describing. You got me a bit confused in the middle and you weren’t very creative with the character descriptions. good story :)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-18 10:23:29That was a great beginning to a great story! You got me a bit confused in the middle and you weren’t very creative with
