I am sure it is not English. Learn to spell, use a spell checker or write in your native language. xxx 18 please fix it and repost once corrected so can be enjoyed.«12» 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:57:58Spell checker would definitly help also checking grammaranonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 09:17:22I’m sure I would have liked your story if I could read it. Learn to spell, use a spell checker or write in your native language. I am sure it is not English. please fix it and repost once corrected so can be enjoyed.«12» Learn to spell, use a spell checker or write in your native language. You just need a proofreader in my opinion.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 06:48:44holy shit, sounded great to me at the beginning, near the end I couldn’t stand trying to make sense of it please revise this, or
