Just nice, but not a great story. xxx And next use all your 5 senses when describing something that suppose to last for a while; that way the reader can feel time pass as so, while experiencing what you’ve experienced. Maybe reading my stories would help. It makes the reader feel bored, as if they had to wait those 5 or 10 minutes. Really Great.Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-27 02:55:29Thanks for the image and fantasySyphriceReport 2009-01-24 14:13:53Nice story. Really Great.Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-27 02:55:29Thanks for the image and fantasySyphriceReport 2009-01-24 14:13:53Nice story. Oh, and try not using time; unless the story heavily depends on it. Maybe reading my stories would help. Maybe reading my stories would help. Cool.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 21:19:04XCSx3L I truly appreciate this blog post.Much thanks again. Cool.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 21:19:04XCSx3L I truly appreciate this blog post.Much thanks again.
