It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. xxx 18 Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. Pronouns should start with a capital(Grace). Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. Spell check please, and greater story formulation wouldn’t hurt.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 06:38:58Take time to proof your stories. Keep going just slow down.«1» Take it to the final phase and then end it. You have the idea in the back of your head you just don’t know how to tell your fingers to type it in.
