Spelling & grammar, nothing glared as wrong. xxx18 THANKS for posting on this site.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-09 19:04:00These pictures are great. The main problem is the “person” speaking or telling the story. A little tedious. Spelling & grammar, nothing glared as wrong. Some paragraphs a little lông; some dialogue not clearly marked! A little tedious. 6/10READERReport 2007-08-11 22:53:24If u stole it at least steal something good!!!!!! Too long. The main problem is the “person” speaking or telling the story. Too long. The scenario & details of action are great. The main problem is the “person” speaking or telling the story. Spelling & grammar, nothing glared as wrong.
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Ela Darling / Madison Young
