You have a vivid imagination and a fine grasp of the English language. One last thought. xxx18 You have made the same mistake so many of us make when we begin to write. You have made the same mistake so many of us make when we begin to write. Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-08 22:27:01the negro talk was stupid, the few that i know SPEAK english BETTER than you write4bearReport 2008-10-22 17:34:13Pretentiious Difficult to follow. The ones ending in “ly” should be limiter even more than the others. The racial stuff might be better handled without the tags like mulatto. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-08 22:27:01the negro talk was stupid, the




















