It’s like you spent a couple of days writing the first part, but them you got in a hurry and just finished it all in one big paragraph to get it over with. this would have got a posative vote IF you hadn’t fucked it up so bad but as is it gets a NEGATIVE vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-12 17:42:02the end killed the story, why would they even allow the moms to watch. xxx 18 You have a lot of talent; please don’t take any more shortcuts and cheat everyone involved, including the characters you made us care about.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-09 15:51:56ruined by the end and lack of a proper finish as usual for this writer negative 50«12345»
