Good story.. xxx The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. kucch bhi likhata.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:44:14yo ho hoe yes no maybe so«1» The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… Good story.. kucch bhi likhata.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:44:14yo ho hoe yes no maybe so«1»
