13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-11 22:02:43needs some back ground to explain what thier relationship was like before college you don’t just wake up one morning and say i am going to suduce my sibling there has to be a build up of some kind this should have been chapter two not oneSSBReport 2008-11-01 14:17:43I’ve read about five of your stories and this one is the only one that was done halfway decently. SSBAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-16 17:12:51pretty nice! xxx 18 Make your stories longer, keep working on spelling and keep going with your descriptions of the action. This was the most readable one I’ve read. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-11 22:02:43needs some back ground to explain what thier relationship was like before college you don’t just wake up one morning and say i am going to suduce my sibling there has to be
