3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 19:45:08Good Story; Needs Part Two. Should have taken some basic writing classes. xxx18 This site said I used Bad Words. Story even though had potential sucked hard! So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 19:45:08Good Story; Needs Part Two. Should have taken some basic writing classes. This site said I used Bad Words. Should have taken some basic writing classes. So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell.
