overall, great storyanonymous readerReport 2013-08-14 16:29:32good start. also don’t forget about the mom.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-09 10:04:07Who cares how long it took to get to the sex or how descriptive it was? xxx video I suggest proof reading the story to make sure that you catch all the spelling mistakes, or get a text to voice program and have it speak you story. I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before the spelling and grammar mistakes made me shake my head and leave.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 19:07:46A little quick to the action but still pretty damn good. I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs before the spelling and grammar mistakes made me shake my head and leave.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-08 19:07:46A little quick to the action but still pretty damn good.
