I liked the writing. keep up the nice work.bubblepopReport 2009-04-28 19:25:33you’ve done a great job on this nicely layed out
i would just love to be herseeminglysatisfiedReport 2008-12-08 17:28:18good job. xxx This is a fantasy story…right ? Mastering a woman might be better if the character did not try to destroy evidence and skulk out of the house like a coward. perhaps. … 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-11-28 10:59:56I liked the story. it is wonderful to read female written stories and hope to see more.anonymousReport 2008-12-08 03:36:01And the moral of the story is ? then maybe she’ll love me. … like your watching the action unfold, or are the mentioned roommate viewing the scene with surveillance equipment. I liked the writing. Mastering a woman might be better if the character did not try to destroy evidence and skulk out of the house like
