7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker . xxx video . … “Female, 23, brn hair, grn eyes, 5’4” 125 lbs, 34C. Your suggestions are lame. Come on guys, give us some freckles, glasses, and tattoos.) The dialogue was erratic, but dialogue is hard. Your suggestions are lame. Your suggestions are lame. He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. The story does have potential though, keep writing.READERReport 2005-10-23 08:43:03Actually, Silver Hair, his step-daughter Katie had C-cups, and the friend, Kelly, had D-cups, and the author made
