Many misspelled words (i.e.you used “of” instead of “off” twice, “…sitting in my bead(sic)”, “gourgeous” instead of “gorgeous”, “waste(sic) band” instead of “waist band”, etc. I mean, you have them alone for a 3 day weekend and the sex is a quick BJ and a quick fuck that lasts only a couple of sentences total. xxx 18 Many misspelled words (i.e.you used “of” instead of “off” twice, “…sitting in my bead(sic)”, “gourgeous” instead of “gorgeous”, “waste(sic) band” instead of “waist band”, etc. The idea of this story is good, but the execution of it falls way too short of hitting the mark of being a great story.«1» Obviously, you did not proofread this or else you should have caught the duplication of words in your sentences. The idea of this story is good, but the execution
