If they were discussing sex, you could have recounted that conversation a little. xxx18 Would any guy refer to his own dick as a “package”? Your writing needs a lot of work.READERReport 2006-04-06 20:10:05i dont think i like feet now…after hearing that shity ass story stop writtingREADERReport 2006-03-10 12:42:46keep writin that was agood oneREADERReport 2005-08-25 13:04:06very good story, make another one«1234» 17 comments«1234»READERReport 2007-07-11 19:30:33all you other cunts are complaining y the fuck dont you write a fucking story you maggots.READERReport 2006-04-19 16:47:24Clumsy. Clumsy and rushed. There was a lot you could have written about when they were walking from the pizza place to the apartment. If they were discussing sex, you could have recounted that conversation a little. If they were discussing sex, you could have recounted that conversation a little.
