I hope you haven’t given up. xxx Keep going!«12» Holy Toledo the sex is beautifully done in that story. I hope you continue to write.READERReport 2006-09-30 02:22:29I like it! Make her part of the mix and make all them really love each other. Get those two out of terrible marriages, and don’t make Thomas Raines and the Tenth Order filth. Holy Toledo the sex is beautifully done in that story. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-10-20 01:18:22A great introduction, but where is the sequel? I hope you continue to write.READERReport 2006-09-30 02:22:29I like it! (Sorry 9-28 if you have to go to the dictionary – if you can read it)READERReport 2006-11-15 00:09:27Great beginning! 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-10-20 01:18:22A great introduction, but where is the sequel? Make her part of the mix and make all them really love each other. The next episode promises to
