I’m not here for literature, and you deliver exactly what I am here for.«1234» KUDOS!!! 20 comments«1234»xtremejumpReport 2011-12-16 02:29:00I gave you a pos rating for plot, and tags, if you other assholes read this shit, don’t be hypocrites, you are into the stuff. xxx18 I agree with others your w riting is bad. (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-23 05:42:13Fuck yes , luv the brutetality , take what u want . I agree with others your w riting is bad. I’m not here for literature, and you deliver exactly what I am here for.«1234» It is a great story but please do a grammar check and read some books on writing techniques for short stories.., All in all, its a 9 on storyline and a 3 on grammar.
