In general, I thought the story was very good though, and a very interesting plot. xxx18 The grammar is a little off, though its probably no worse than some people who have english as their first language. Perhaps try and find someone to proof read for you, and also try and read more other stories (not necessarily sex stories) to get a better grasp of the sentence structures. Perhaps try and find someone to proof read for you, and also try and read more other stories (not necessarily sex stories) to get a better grasp of the sentence structures. The grammar is a little off, though its probably no worse than some people who have english as their first language. Perhaps try and find someone to proof read for you, and also try and read
Actors:
Mina Von D
