Break up the paragraphs. xxx18 Break up the paragraphs. Use complete sentences, basically proper English.wtf20007Report 2008-07-15 12:36:46good stoiry would like 2 see a follow on…«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-27 13:15:11Good story but improve on the sentence structure a bit. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-27 13:15:11Good story but improve on the sentence structure a bit. Break up the paragraphs. Use complete sentences, basically proper English.wtf20007Report 2008-07-15 12:36:46good stoiry would like 2 see a follow on…«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-27 13:15:11Good story but improve on the sentence structure a bit. Break up the paragraphs. Use complete sentences, basically proper English.wtf20007Report 2008-07-15 12:36:46good stoiry would like 2 see a follow on…«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-27 13:15:11Good story but improve on the sentence structure a bit.
