2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 01:43:23So where is that camping place I would like to go:).anonymous readerReport 2012-10-04 13:07:53It’s a good plot and story line, however, it could use some more development and details. xxx video Maybe try a second chapter and see what you can do with it.«1» There is a lot you can expand on. Maybe try a second chapter and see what you can do with it.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 01:43:23So where is that camping place I would like to go:).anonymous readerReport 2012-10-04 13:07:53It’s a good plot and story line, however, it could use some more development and details. Maybe try a second chapter and see what you can do with it.«1»
